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W.A.L.T: read information and then re-write the important parts in our own words
Today in our reading groups we have been working on re-writing the Armistice Centenary which is when the first world war ended so that is what we are writing about in our own words. Hope you enjoy
This is the what we are re-writing
At 11am on 11 November this year, Aotearoa New Zealand marked the centenary of the armistice that ended the First World War in 1918. On that day 100 years ago, after four years of brutal conflict, war finally gave way to peace." - From https://ww100.govt.nz/armistice
This is the one that I re-wrote
On November the 11th 11:00 am 1918 world war 1 finally ended in peace from then it has been 100 years. After 4 years the war ended in peace.
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