Kia ora everyone,
Today we had to do a DLO about gold mining. So yea here is my my DLO...
Thanks for reading byee
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora everyone,
Today we had to do a DLO about gold mining. So yea here is my my DLO...
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hello Nevaeh I really like your DLO about gold rush. I think that you need to work on trying to not put on smaller paragraphs. Ok bye that´s it
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