Today I will be going to be showing you my easttle writing. The prompt is a photo of a water park which I will show you soon. We only had 45mins to write it or something like that. Any way I hope you like my work here it is...
Water park
One really hot, I went to the new water park that was in town. My cousin and
I were so excited to go we it felt like we could die. We jumped into the car with
excitement and joy. We got closer and closer until we were finally there, I
sprinted to the changing rooms and quickly put on my togs.
I were so excited to go we it felt like we could die. We jumped into the car with
excitement and joy. We got closer and closer until we were finally there, I
sprinted to the changing rooms and quickly put on my togs.
When I got by the water it was cold but it was burning hot outside so it got
warmer. It was way better than I imagined it would be. It was so awesome I could
stay there for my whole life.
warmer. It was way better than I imagined it would be. It was so awesome I could
stay there for my whole life.
The only thing you could hear from me and me cousin was ‘splash splash’. As
me and my cousin played you could see the happiness on our faces, the smiles
on the face were so big they were like an upside down rainbow.
me and my cousin played you could see the happiness on our faces, the smiles
on the face were so big they were like an upside down rainbow.
We stayed there for so long, I felt like I was 50 years old by the time we left.
There was this huge bucket that had water in it the tips on you when there is
enough water in it. Me and my cousin wanted for it to fall on us and when it did it
felt like it was trying to push us under the was like it didn’t like us.
There was this huge bucket that had water in it the tips on you when there is
enough water in it. Me and my cousin wanted for it to fall on us and when it did it
felt like it was trying to push us under the was like it didn’t like us.
The next part we went on was the slide. When my cousin went down the slide I
waited at the top and there was the same bucket thing like there was in the pool.
I had a plan wet here with when she comes down and that is what I did.
waited at the top and there was the same bucket thing like there was in the pool.
I had a plan wet here with when she comes down and that is what I did.
We played and we played and we played until it was just about pitch black and
we had to go. We got changed and then got in the car. I was a bit sad that we
had to live but then I remember the good time there we could hopefully go
another hot day like it was today.
we had to go. We got changed and then got in the car. I was a bit sad that we
had to live but then I remember the good time there we could hopefully go
another hot day like it was today.
THE END
Thanks for reading this post. I hope you liked and enjoyed it. Comment if you have been to one of the new water parks in town yet. Any way have a good day byee
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