Today I will be going to be showing you my writing. My amazing teacher Miss leonard explained to us that what exploding the moment ment and she showed us example. Then we had to think about a time and then the moment that you are writing about. Any way here is my work I hope you like it...
Exploding the moment
Event: Kapa haka
The moment: being a tuakana with my friends for ko te whirika
Better words
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We were just going to start ko te whirika, my friends and I said “toru wha” in a loudest and strongest voices. Then all of a satun I heard a bunch of joyful and happy voices come in with “ko te whirika”. In those moments I glazed at everyone they had a massive smile on their face and so did I, it was like if someone having the worst day of the life we could easily make it the best day of their life. We were singing so loud but no one was screaming so it was just absolutely perfect. It was like a never ending beautiful harmony that would hopefully never end. It was like a bomb that just exploded with unexplainable voices.
Thanks for reading I hope you enjoyed my work. Comment if you know the song ko te whirika. Thanks again byee
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