This blog is about some writing that I have been doing in my class. So for writing we have been doing descriptive writing and what we have been learning to do is changing an I sentence into a the sentence, changing a telling sentence to a descriptive one. We also have been learning to use five seance in or writing and the five seance are sight, feel, smell, hear and emotion. So what we have got all of that learning and made a story about a big problem like earth quacks, tsunamis and meany more. But what I am writing a bout is a (Looked Down At School). So I am going to show you my favourite part of my writing. So here it is, hope you enjoy...
I was in class waiting to go to road portal. I could see my friends, the teacher, the white board with our topic staff and the tables with science rocks on it. I was bored, tired and excited to go home. Then the lock down bell rang. The whole class heard Syrian. We all got on the ground and was silent. Then our teacher told us what was happening.
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