Today I will be going to be doing another summer learning journey activity. So what we had to do for this activity was we had to make a poem of me setting foot on the moon so what I did was I go one of my best friends to come help me which was Susie if you want to see more about her cheek out some of my other post there is a link to here blog. Any way so what we did was made a google drawing then we just wrote our poem. Know I am going to show you my work I hop eyou like it here it is...
Thank you so much for reading. If you are wondering who the man was it was Neil Armstrong here is a link all about him. Comment if you alreading know a fact about him. Any way have an awesone holiday and a great day byee
Kia ora Nevaeh!
ReplyDeleteMikey here. Congratulations on completing another activity - you're doing an awesome job! :)
This is a wonderfully written poem, Nevaeh. You've presented it well and I like how you've been able to make it rhyme - I always find it so tricky to write rhyming poetry.
It's great that you and Susie are able to work so well together but please remember that these activities are to be done independently. We're happy for you to work alongside your friends but it's important that your posts aren't exactly the same as we won't be able to give either of you the full number of points for them. If you'd like to have another go at this activity, and produce something that is in your own words, I'd love to read it and award you the full amount of points.
Thanks Nevaeh.
Have a lovely afternoon,
Mikey :)