It was all a dream

Hi Awesome readers,

How are you today, 

I will be showing yous a peace of my writing. My writing is about a nightmare that I had at my friends house. At the time I was watching a horror but when I feel asleep a had a nightmare.

My awesome teacher Miss D gave us a prompt and it was It was all a dream,

I had an Editing buddy her name is Susie she was an amazing buddy.

Anyway this is my work.

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It was all a dream

When I stayed the night at my friend Royal’s house we were just going to bed but we wanted to watch a scary movie it was called Halloween 4. Everyone was asleep and I was the last one asleep, I keep trying to go to sleep but couldn’t, when I finally did I had a nightmare about the main character in the movie was chasing me, Michael Myers. In my dream I was at my house at first I turned around then I saw him holding a knife steering at me with a grin on his face but in the movie you could never see his face so I started to build all my braveness up and walked up to him and take off his mask he looked like my Royal’s dad. I said to him said Paul is that you he said not any more my name is Michael Myers then he evilly laugh. He ran out of my house. I ran to Royal’s house. I said where's your dad.  Royal’s brothers turned around said we don’t know. I thought to myself something is wrong. They started to cry out blood but laughing.

Hope you enjoyed my work please comment if you got scared or not.
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