Exploding the moment

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Today I will be going to be showing you my writing. My amazing teacher Miss leonard explained to us that what exploding the moment ment and she showed us example. Then we had to think about a time and then the moment that you are writing about. Any way here is my work I hope you like it... 

Exploding the moment 

Event: Kapa haka

The moment: being a tuakana with my friends for ko te whirika 

Better words

Senses

We were just going to start ko te whirika, my friends and I said “toru wha” in a loudest and strongest  voices. Then all of a satun I heard a bunch of joyful and happy voices come in with “ko te whirika”. In those moments I glazed at everyone they had a massive smile on their face and so did I, it was like if someone having the worst day of the life we could easily make it the best day of their life. We were singing so loud but no one was screaming so it was just absolutely perfect. It was like a never ending beautiful harmony that would hopefully never end. It was like a bomb that just exploded with unexplainable voices.

Thanks for reading I hope you enjoyed my work. Comment if you know the song ko te whirika. Thanks again byee

WEEKLY WORD

Kia ora everyone,

Today I will be going to do my weekly word. This week's word is empty. This was really easy so I did this really quick. This blog inclued what I think it means, the real definition and a sentence with the word in it. Any way I hope you enjoy my work here it is...

THANKS for reading I hope you enjoy. Byeee

MY RENDER FOREST FOR READING

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In today I will going to be showing you my render forest dlo for read. So what the dlo is for what I think about the book that I am reading Sun and other invention. By the way here is a link to render forest cheek it out it is really cool. Any way here is my work hope you enjoy.




Thanks for reading this blog I hope you enjoy. Comment if you have read this book before. BYEE

MY WRITING

Kia ora everyone,

Today I wil be going to show you my writing. First we got a prompt from our site and then we got some words that we have to add into our writing. Then after we did that we had to add our six sences which is smell, sight, hear, taste, touch and emotion. Then my amazing teach Miss Leonard put some feedback a the bottom when we were done. Any way here is my work I hope yoy enjoy...

THE STORM

• Chilling
• Forbidden
• Hesitant
• Unfocused 
• Fascinating

  

• Touch
• Taste
• Sight
• Emotion
• Smell
• hearing

I could hear the thunder, booming in the sky. Suddenly the lights
went out and the room went pitch black, at that moment I felt a
chilling feeling go down my spine.  

You could see the tiredness in my eyes but I was so unfocused
I couldn’t fall asleep. I couldn’t get out of bed, it was like I was
Forbidden to get out of bed and get my phone to ring
someone for help. I was in hesitant mood.

The noise of creaking stairs was playing in my head like it was real “creak creak creak”. All of a satun I saw fascinating at this figure that was at the other end of my room, it looked like a man with no face and a dark hoodie. I was really getting scared know like I could taste the fear in my mouth I could even smell the fear. So I closed my eyes for a bit. 

I finally had the courage to get out of bed and run to the draw across my room and grab my phone but then it starts to play up and set of alarms, play songs and call people I don’t even know. 

I called for help. As the phone was ringing I heard footsteps down stairs, I froze in fear and drop my phone. I grabbed it and ran to see who it was.

We watch the tape and what I saw made me scared he was in my room. The figure was him he went through my phone and he stole a lot of my stuff.

In the morning I moved out and always locked my doors and kept my phone close to me when I sleep.

THE END 

Wow Nevaeh! You have really thought out of the box with your ideas. 

Positives:

• Amazing use of strong words that really grab the reader's attention 
• I love your use of senses in your writing. You have thought hard about how you can include them in sentences.

Next steps:

• Check if the words you had to include fit in your sentences correctly. Read your sentences to make sure they flow.
• Think about your ideas and how they link together. Try not to have too many ideas introduced at once and then cut them off. Think about how they could work together and develop your story. 

Thank you so so so so much for reading. Comment if you like my work or if it is interesting or not. Have good day BYYYYYYEEE

MY WEEKLY WORD AGAIN

 Hi everyone, welcome to my blog,

Today I will be going to show you my weekly word. This weekly word is anxious. I already new this word. Any way here is my work I hope you like my work...

Thank you so much for reading my post. Comment if a time when you were anxious. Any way hope yur day is amazing byeeeee

MY MATHS

!!KIA ORANA EVERYONE!!

Today I will be going to show you my maths work. So what we had to was we had to figure the answer to these question and then show on a white board how you worked it out. Any way here is my work I hope you like it...

Thank you so much for reading my blog. Sorry if some of the answer are wrong I was in a rush. Any way have great day BYEEE

WHEN I GROW UP

Aloha readers,

Welcome to my blog, today I will be showing you my writting about what I want to be when I grow up. What I wanted to be was a professinal Netball player. Any way my writting explain why, what inspired me, who inspired me and much more. Any way I am not going to give away any more I hope you like it here it is...

WHAT I WANT TO BE WHEN I AM OLDER

When I grow up I want to be a professional Netball player because I can represent New Zealand.  

What inspired me to play Netball was when I was five, which was the first time I ever played, I thought it was soccer but when I went on the court it wasn’t soccer. I kept playing it because I was really good at it. 

My school Netball team was the only team I played in until my Netball teacher Tarsh asked me if I wanted to play for the under 12 hornby team. 

My team was really good, in one of our tournaments we came 2nd out of the whole canterbury. In my Netball career I have been to 12 tournaments.

A person that I really look up to is Katrina Rore because she was really good GK, GD and WD and I am really good at all of them.

I think that I will be a good at being a Netball player because I am good now so I will get to practice for a few more years and I will be even better. 

When I made this decision in the middle of a Netball game I wanted to do this for a living and ever since then every Netball game I am excited and try and get better. 

Thank you so much for reading. Comment what you want to be when you grow up or what you are doing now. Any way have a amazing day bye

!!!!WEEKLY WORD!!!!

Hi Bloggers,

In today's blog I will be doing another weekly word. This week's word was unfocused. It was really easy and I knew what it ment straight away. Any way I hope you like my work here it is...

Thank you so so so much for reading this post. I hope you enjoyed it. Comment a time when you were unfocused. I hope you have a awesome day Goodbyeeeee

BRAINSTORM ARUGMENTS

Kia ora Everyone,

Welcome to my blog today I will be showing you what me and my class has been doing for topic. What we did was we went and found a buddie then came up with word the involves friendship. My buddie was Finau and the word that we came up with was arugment. Any way we had to come up what we could do after and before. Here is my work I hope you like it...

Thank you so much for reading my blog post. Hope you have a good day byyeeeee

MY EASTTLE

Hello everyone,

Today I will be going to be showing you my easttle writing. The prompt is a photo of a water park which I will show you soon. We only had 45mins to write it or something like that. Any way I hope you like my work here it is...

Water park

One really hot, I went to the new water park that was in town. My cousin and
I were so excited to go we it felt like we could die. We jumped into the car with
excitement and joy.  We got closer and closer until we were finally there, I
sprinted to the changing rooms and quickly put on my togs. 

When I got by the water it was cold but it was burning hot outside so it got
warmer. It was way better than I imagined it would be. It was so awesome I could
stay there for my whole life. 

The only thing you could hear from me and me cousin was ‘splash splash’. As
me and my cousin played you could see the happiness on our faces, the smiles
on the face were so big they were like an upside down rainbow.

We stayed there for so long, I felt like I was 50 years old by the time we left.
There was this huge bucket that had water in it the tips on you when there is
enough water in it. Me and my cousin wanted for it to fall on us and when it did it
felt like it was trying to push us under the was like it didn’t like us. 

The next part we went on was the slide. When my cousin went down the slide I
waited at the top and there was the same bucket thing like there was in the pool.
I had a plan wet here with when she comes down and that is what I did.

We played and we played and we played until it was just about pitch black and
we had to go. We got changed and then got in the car. I was a bit sad that we
had to live but then I remember the good time there we could hopefully go
another hot day like it was today.

THE END  

Thanks for reading this post. I hope you liked and enjoyed it. Comment if you have been to one of the new water parks in town yet. Any way have a good day byee 

!100 WORD CHALLENGE!

Kia ora katoa, Welcome to my blog,

In this blog I will be going to be showing you my 100 word challenge. My story was about me staying at my Nan's house and I can't go to sleep. I am not going  to spoil the story but the last thing I will tell you is this story is true. Any way here is my story, I hope you enjoy...

Thanks for reading my blog I hope you enjoyed. Comment if you have ever been in a situation like this. Have a great day byee

BREAD MATH

Aloha Everyone,

Today I will be doing doing a math activity. Which was Shadrach went with his friends to the Filipino bakery. He spent exactly $8.90. What combinations of buns could Shadrach have bought? Try and find as many combinations as possible. Any way we got partners and mine was Finau and Kalolaine here is a link to there blog. Any way here is my work hope you enjoyed...

Thank you so much for reading this post. I hope you liked it. Comment if you have tried this bread before? Any way I hope the rest of your day it awesome byeeeeeeee

MY MONEY MATHS

Kia ora readers,

Today I am going to be showing you my blog post about my math. My teacher choose some decimals and then turn them into money. Then we had to get some NZ coins and make the decimal money thing. Any way I hope you enjoy my work here it is.

Thanks for reading my blog. I hope you enjoyed my work. Comment and please give me some feedback. Any way have an amazing day byyee

MY WEEKLY WORD

Kia orana Everyone,

In this blog I will be going to do one on my weekly words. This week's word is resentful. So this word was kinda hard. I didn't really now what is meant and didn't understand the dictionary definition. Any way like the last one this includes a what I think the word means, my own sentence and and the dictionary definition. Here is my work I hope you enjoy...

  
Thanks for reading my blog post. I hope you enjoyed. Comment if you have ever felt resentful towards someone. I hope the rest of your day goes amazing byyeeeeee