Exploding the moment

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Today I will be going to be showing you my writing. My amazing teacher Miss leonard explained to us that what exploding the moment ment and she showed us example. Then we had to think about a time and then the moment that you are writing about. Any way here is my work I hope you like it... 

Exploding the moment 

Event: Kapa haka

The moment: being a tuakana with my friends for ko te whirika 

Better words

Senses

We were just going to start ko te whirika, my friends and I said “toru wha” in a loudest and strongest  voices. Then all of a satun I heard a bunch of joyful and happy voices come in with “ko te whirika”. In those moments I glazed at everyone they had a massive smile on their face and so did I, it was like if someone having the worst day of the life we could easily make it the best day of their life. We were singing so loud but no one was screaming so it was just absolutely perfect. It was like a never ending beautiful harmony that would hopefully never end. It was like a bomb that just exploded with unexplainable voices.

Thanks for reading I hope you enjoyed my work. Comment if you know the song ko te whirika. Thanks again byee

WEEKLY WORD

Kia ora everyone,

Today I will be going to do my weekly word. This week's word is empty. This was really easy so I did this really quick. This blog inclued what I think it means, the real definition and a sentence with the word in it. Any way I hope you enjoy my work here it is...

THANKS for reading I hope you enjoy. Byeee

MY RENDER FOREST FOR READING

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In today I will going to be showing you my render forest dlo for read. So what the dlo is for what I think about the book that I am reading Sun and other invention. By the way here is a link to render forest cheek it out it is really cool. Any way here is my work hope you enjoy.




Thanks for reading this blog I hope you enjoy. Comment if you have read this book before. BYEE

MY WRITING

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Today I wil be going to show you my writing. First we got a prompt from our site and then we got some words that we have to add into our writing. Then after we did that we had to add our six sences which is smell, sight, hear, taste, touch and emotion. Then my amazing teach Miss Leonard put some feedback a the bottom when we were done. Any way here is my work I hope yoy enjoy...

THE STORM

• Chilling
• Forbidden
• Hesitant
• Unfocused 
• Fascinating

  

• Touch
• Taste
• Sight
• Emotion
• Smell
• hearing

I could hear the thunder, booming in the sky. Suddenly the lights
went out and the room went pitch black, at that moment I felt a
chilling feeling go down my spine.  

You could see the tiredness in my eyes but I was so unfocused
I couldn’t fall asleep. I couldn’t get out of bed, it was like I was
Forbidden to get out of bed and get my phone to ring
someone for help. I was in hesitant mood.

The noise of creaking stairs was playing in my head like it was real “creak creak creak”. All of a satun I saw fascinating at this figure that was at the other end of my room, it looked like a man with no face and a dark hoodie. I was really getting scared know like I could taste the fear in my mouth I could even smell the fear. So I closed my eyes for a bit. 

I finally had the courage to get out of bed and run to the draw across my room and grab my phone but then it starts to play up and set of alarms, play songs and call people I don’t even know. 

I called for help. As the phone was ringing I heard footsteps down stairs, I froze in fear and drop my phone. I grabbed it and ran to see who it was.

We watch the tape and what I saw made me scared he was in my room. The figure was him he went through my phone and he stole a lot of my stuff.

In the morning I moved out and always locked my doors and kept my phone close to me when I sleep.

THE END 

Wow Nevaeh! You have really thought out of the box with your ideas. 

Positives:

• Amazing use of strong words that really grab the reader's attention 
• I love your use of senses in your writing. You have thought hard about how you can include them in sentences.

Next steps:

• Check if the words you had to include fit in your sentences correctly. Read your sentences to make sure they flow.
• Think about your ideas and how they link together. Try not to have too many ideas introduced at once and then cut them off. Think about how they could work together and develop your story. 

Thank you so so so so much for reading. Comment if you like my work or if it is interesting or not. Have good day BYYYYYYEEE

MY WEEKLY WORD AGAIN

 Hi everyone, welcome to my blog,

Today I will be going to show you my weekly word. This weekly word is anxious. I already new this word. Any way here is my work I hope you like my work...

Thank you so much for reading my post. Comment if a time when you were anxious. Any way hope yur day is amazing byeeeee

MY MATHS

!!KIA ORANA EVERYONE!!

Today I will be going to show you my maths work. So what we had to was we had to figure the answer to these question and then show on a white board how you worked it out. Any way here is my work I hope you like it...

Thank you so much for reading my blog. Sorry if some of the answer are wrong I was in a rush. Any way have great day BYEEE

WHEN I GROW UP

Aloha readers,

Welcome to my blog, today I will be showing you my writting about what I want to be when I grow up. What I wanted to be was a professinal Netball player. Any way my writting explain why, what inspired me, who inspired me and much more. Any way I am not going to give away any more I hope you like it here it is...

WHAT I WANT TO BE WHEN I AM OLDER

When I grow up I want to be a professional Netball player because I can represent New Zealand.  

What inspired me to play Netball was when I was five, which was the first time I ever played, I thought it was soccer but when I went on the court it wasn’t soccer. I kept playing it because I was really good at it. 

My school Netball team was the only team I played in until my Netball teacher Tarsh asked me if I wanted to play for the under 12 hornby team. 

My team was really good, in one of our tournaments we came 2nd out of the whole canterbury. In my Netball career I have been to 12 tournaments.

A person that I really look up to is Katrina Rore because she was really good GK, GD and WD and I am really good at all of them.

I think that I will be a good at being a Netball player because I am good now so I will get to practice for a few more years and I will be even better. 

When I made this decision in the middle of a Netball game I wanted to do this for a living and ever since then every Netball game I am excited and try and get better. 

Thank you so much for reading. Comment what you want to be when you grow up or what you are doing now. Any way have a amazing day bye